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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第60期

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Morning~AmyLee要认真规划好备考的每一天,你呢!非常感谢大家的陪伴,我们YY可可备考小组的成员越来越多了,不许偷懒,托福优秀范文一天写一篇学一篇哦,写好了可以发送至我邮箱keke3096@qq.com进行互批,共同进步!^^

我已经托福三战过了,对考试各方面都很熟悉,所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以发邮件给我,我会尽力为大家解答。

每天的写作任务是这样的,写好每天的作文发至我的邮箱(如果你想加入作文批改小组请注明),我们将进入互批作文模式。在此我对每天的topic进行解析和范文精讲,请大家写完作文之后不忘进行比较,找出自己的不足之处。开始吧!

60. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specificreasons and examples to support your answer.

参考分析:

同意这个观点比较容易写。

  • 成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape)
  • 游戏对老年人更是如此。
  • 从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)

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60、游戏对于成年人来说对于儿童一样重要
(1)进行游戏有助于培养团队精神,这在成年人中更为重要
(2)进行游戏可以让成年人放松,感受到了除了工作以外还有更多额外的东西可以享受
(3)进行游戏可以让成年人感受到人生的成功与失败,以更乐观的心情对待工作

Topic 60 Are games important to adults?

Playing games has always been thought to be important to the development of well-balanced and creative children; however, what part, if any, it should playin the lives of adults has never been researched that deeply. I believe that playing games is every bit as important for adults as for children. Not only is taking time out to play games with our children and other adults valuable to building interpersonal relationships but is also a wonderful way to release built up tension.

There's nothing my husband enjoys more after a hard day of work than to come home and play a game of Chess with someone. This enables him to unwind from the day's activities and to discuss the highs and lows of the day in a non-threatening, kickback environment. A close friend received one of my most memorable wedding gifts, a Backgammon set. I asked him why in the world he had given us such agift. He replied that he felt that an important aspect of marriage was for acouple to never quit playing games together. Over the years, as I have come to purchase and play, with other couples & coworkers, many games like: Monopoly, Chutes & Ladders, Mastermind, Dweebs, Geeks, & Weirdos, etc. I can reflect onthe integral part they have played in our weekends and our "shut-off theT. V. and do something more stimulating" weeks. They have enriched my lifeand made it more interesting. Sadly, many adults forget that games even exist andhave put them away in the cupboards, forgotten until the grandchildren come over.

All too often, adults get so caught up in working to pay the bills and keeping up withthe "Joneses'" that they neglect to harness the fun in life; the fun that can be the reward of enjoying a relaxing game with another person. It hasbeen said that "man is that he might have joy" but all too often we skate through life without much of it. Playing games allows us to: relax, learn something new and stimulating, interact with people on a different more comfortable level, and to enjoy non-threatening competition. For these reasons, adults should place a higher priority on playing games in their lives.

好了,今天就说这么多,大家一定要坚持练习作文,每天进步一小点,一个月下来托福写作绝对是质的提升!希望大家跟着我每天一篇练下去,写作都是硬功夫,跟小时候每周都要写语文作文是一样的,功夫到家自然成,加油!

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